Today we have shown Mr Michie our improved version of our opening for there feedback and comments on how to improve it.
Below is our improved version:
Improvement and Teachers Comments:
Flows a lot better.
An extremely pleased with it overall
Lengthen the title' The Game' for another second - So that it can be read.
Lengthen alarm - So this it start before the actors start to run on to the screen as the running start a little to quick.
These are the final improvements to be made to the opening before the deadline of the 30th and now this will hopefully give us the best chance of getting a high grade as now it is of the best quality we can do.
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