Final Cut Draft 1 - Teachers Feedback and Comments

Today we have shown our improved rough cut to your teachers for there feedback and comments on how to improve it before the deadline.

Below is our improved rough cut: 

Improvement and Teachers Comments:

Take out the photos at the beginning - After changing it all around the photos don't work any more, they do not fit in with the sequence. 

Add in more footage of the MI5 scene - As the photos are being remove there needs to be more of the MI5 scene to keep it at 2 minutes.

Change order of credits - The order of the credits need to be change it to fits with a traditional order for a title sequence. The new order shown be:

- Canterbury Productions Presents

- An AJA Production

- The Game

- Actors Names

- Crews Names and Titles (finishing with director) 

Music transition is to slow - At the moment the transition leaves the audience think that there will be more to come, a faster transition will stop this feel. 

From the beginning after the photos to the title sequence it flows well.

The alarm audio level decreases as the character is running away -  This is good as it add perspective and identifies to the audiences that the male lead is running away.

Adjust the voice level in the MI5 scene - At the moment it is fluctuates and makes it obvious that they are different moments in time.    

The varied shots within the MI5 scene is good.

The feedback has helped us identify new areas to work on and improve for the final deadline. Now we need to improve the title sequence to achieve the highest level of quality giving us the best chance to get a high grade. We need to make this amendments before the March 30th as that is our final deadline.